Thursday, August 4th, 2016
The Kiwi
Tap, tap, tap. As I suddenly broke into the light, my eyes hurt, then opened. I saw heaps of light and a person. I got out of the white stuff and ran around everywhere. But, as I was running, two hands caught me. I was so scared I thought that my eyes were about to pop out! Luckily this person put me in a glass box with some worms and grubs.
The next day I found myself in the wild! I couldn't believe it! Finally I was so happy that I started to make my burrow. Then I put some leaves onto of my burrow so that my home was safe. After that I started running everywhere except the stoat's home.
I said to myself "I'm getting hungry. I better get some food for myself." So off I went to find some worms, grubs and little stones. At last I found the stones and ate all of them. Just then I remembered that I have acute sense of smell and hearing so I used my long beak to lead me to a worm. At last I found a worm...wait, it's a long worm! Yay! I sure did like it!
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ReplyDeleteWOW! Mahin you really did draw me in and add lots of detail
ReplyDeletemahin you are a great writer you used lots of description and made it really intresting i loved reading it
ReplyDeletekeep up the good work - Lola❤️